Re: Wallpaper's Page (NSFW arts and writing)
The large one is a very luverly piece of art. I agree, though, that it loses a lot of clarity when shrunk. Maybe, for the small version, cut down on the amount of shadowing?
I note that the light source is differently positioned in your version. In the original, it's positioned to the viewer's left and down; in yours, it's right and high - at a distance with, if not beyond, the girl. Might it appear better if the light source was a little closer to the viewer - and therefore more in front of the girl?