Caressing Dynamo: “regain a 5 energy” should be “regain 5 energy”
Swift: “While not in a stance, gain 5% to your chance to dodge” should be, while not in a stance, you gain an additional 5% chance to dodge”
Escape artist: “increses” should be “increases”
Unbounded: should potentially switch to unbound? Unbounded isn’t a word, but you can keep it if you want. Not a huge nitpick.
Magic resistance when increasing: “bodys” should be “body’s”
Elly recall stones convo: “and calmly puts” should be “and she calmly puts”
Elly recall stones convo: “woven in through” should by “woven with”
Elly recall stones convo: “Additionally the magical weave” should be “Additionally, the magical weave” (I may like commas, but in this case it is better to have one there)
Elly recall stones convo: “detect, physical and emotional” should be “detect physical and emotional”
Elly recall stones convo: “This all culminates in it perfectly sensing the danger someone is in and if that danger is over a limit, it takes the user to the church” should be “This all culminates in the recall stone being able to sense the potential danger the user is in, and if that danger surpasses a threshold at any given point, the user is teleported to the church!” (I figured it might fit her eriudite character a little more when rewritten)
Elly recall stones convo: “recall stones. I can one hundred percent” should be “recall stones, I can one hundred percent”
Alraune struggle fail (sex, anal): “thrusting into her!” should be “thrusting back into her”
Alraune (and Nicci) struggle fail (sex, anal): “rythmically” should be “rhythmically”
Alraune struggle fail (making out): “keeps a her arms” should be “keeps her arms” *Not limited to the Alraune, I won’t repeat individual entries, but I will put the names of the others monsters that make this mistake here: Kyra, Lizard Girl, Nicci, Mika
Alraune (and Nicci) struggle success (making out) “makout session” should be “makeout session”
Angry Lizard Girl (and Kyra, and Lizard Girl) struggle fail (anal): “groinn” should be “groin”
Elf struggle fail (sex, anal): “keep fucking her” should be “continue fucking her”
Elf struggle fail (blowjob): “As you grab her head” should be “But as you grab her head” (to keep it consistent between all the other ones starting with “But”)
Nicci struggle fail (sex, anal, breast smother, a whole lot more, just Control + F): “pheremones” should be “pheromones”
Nicci struggle fail (titfuck): “You’re cocks staying right here” should be “Your cock’s staying right here”
Nicci struggle success (breast smother): “Nici’s” should be “Nicci’s”
Nicci struggle attempt (intoxicating embrace, soft amber embrace): “trys” should be “tries”
Nicci struggle fail (intoxicating embrace, soft amber embrace): “aginsts” should be “against”
Nicci struggle attempt (soft amber embrace): “breats” should be “breasts”
Perpetua (and slime girl) struggle fail (anal): “desprately” should be “desperately”
Perpetua (and slime girl) struggle fail (50% slimed, 100% slimed): “copious goo refuses” should be “copious amounts of goo refuse”
Perpetua struggle fail (50% slimed): “to no avail and her slime” should be “to no avail as her slime”
Perpetua handjob attack: “accidently” should be “accidentally” (different form of same word)
Slime girl struggle success reaction (anal): “notmally” should be “normally”
Succubus inkeep struggle fail (sex, anal): “keep fucking her” should be “continue fucking her”
Succubus inkeep struggle success reaction (sex): “wan’t” should be “want”
Succubus inkeep struggle fail (blowjob): “frevor” should be “fervor”
Ancilla struggle fail (sex): “caresses you body” should be “caresses your body”
Ancilla struggle fail (sex, anal): “hips against you! Leaving you unable to move from pleasure” should be “hips against you, leaving you unable to move from the pleasure”
Ancilla struggle fail (sex, anal): “cute expression! Then you realize” should be “cute expression on her face before you realize”
Ancilla struggle fail (cuddle): “your find your holding her tighter” should be “you find yourself holding her tighter”
Ancilla struggle fail (footjob): “in pain and pleasure” should be “in both pain and pleasure”
Ancilla struggle fail (making out): “emotionlessly” should be “emotionless” (but emotionlessly should totally be a word, I do agree)
Imp struggle fail (sex, anal): “disloged” should be “dislodged”
Imp struggle fail (sex, anal): “lose your momentum. Keeping your cock” should be “lose your momentum, keeping your cock”
Imp struggle fail (sex, anal): “breifly” should be “briefly”
Imp struggle fail (sex, anal): “shudder and moan! Stopping your escape” should be “shudder and moan, stopping your escape”
Imp struggle fail (blowjob): “But as she lightly bites down on your cock stopping you immediately, and she glares up at you” should be “But she lightly bites down on your cock, stopping you immediately before she glares up at you”
Imp struggle fail (blowjob): “Everytime” should be “Every time”
Imp struggle fail (blowjob): “as she squeezes one of your balls in her hand, and realize” should be “and as she squeezes one of your balls in her hands, you realize”
Matango struggle fail (sex, anal): “accidently” should be “accidentally”
Matango struggle fail (sex, anal): “keep fucking her” should be “continue fucking her”
Matango struggle fail (sex): “rythmically” should be “rhythmically”
Mika struggle fail (anal, sex, making out): “lusious” should be “luscious”
Mika struggle fail (sex): “despratly” should be “desperately”
Mika struggle attempt (tailjob): “fromm” should be “from”
Mika struggle fail (tailjob): “simple escapes” should be “simply escapes”
Mika struggle success reaction (making out): “imporant” should be “important”
Mimic struggle fail (sex, making out): “capitilizes” should be “capitalizes”
Mimic struggle fail (sex): “and as her tongue deeply assaults your mouth leaving you helpless against the sudden intense make out session and she easily pushes your cock back into her pussy” should be “and as her tongue deeply assaults your mouth, you are left helpless against the intense make out session as she easily pushes your cock back into her pussy”
Mimic struggle fail (sex): “rythmically” should be “rhythmically”
Mimic struggle fail (restrained w/ charm mimic’s total embrace): “but unable to” should be “but is unable to”
Mimic struggle fail (restrained, mimic’s total embrace): “breifly” should be “briefly”
Mimic struggle fail (restrained, mimic’s total embrace): “deepining” should be “deepening”
Mimic struggle fail (restrained, mimic’s kiss, and mimic’s kissing embrace): “treasure chest, the pull you back in” should be “treasure chest, the {attackerName} pulls you back in”
Sofia struggle fail (sex, anal): “rythmically” should be “rhythmically”
Sofia struggle fail (sex, anal): “you mind is stricken” should be “your mind is stricken”
Sofia struggle fail (making out): “and as he stays locked in a deep passionate kiss” should be “and they/he stays locked in a deep passionate kiss” (this one is a little iffy, it depends on how you want the character to be named. Character name? He? They? Up to you.)
