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[Williamtheshatner]

-Lowered the damage of arouse and arousara.

Well, shit. There goes my next build plan of willpower dominating everything. I suppose I'll go for it, but it won't be quite as spectacular as I had planned.

 

[Cryswar]

Soooo time for my annual mini review where I ruin everything!

-I like the new system of allowing you to continually level up until you run out to XP (tested it with 50000 xp from an elf - took a while to get thru lmao). So far I haven't been able to break it yet via skills/money/XP/etc, good work!

-Not sure if bug or feature, but if you have multiple same-named NPCs in different folders (ex. a Trisha in Event Cards and a Trisha in Town), event calls for them can get a little funky. The Mysterious Inn event for example defaults to the added town NPC Trisha. Is there a way to clarify which the game should be looking for? As with some of my questions I can just use different names (ex. WaifuTrisha, SuccuTrisha, etc) for clarity but I figured I'd ask.

-Color seems weird, using the example in mod guide of {pink}text{colorEnd} returns an error and I can't seem to finagle it into working. Not a big deal, I don't usually use colors, just noticed when experimenting.

<3333 affection check, SO useful already!

-Stat balance seems solid overall from what I can tell from testing, Power and Tech builds have similar damage output now, and Power cucks restrains while Tech gets first-turn advantage (FTA) and dodges more. FTA is HUGE but so is not getting perma restrained so from what I've tried so far, overall seems roughly even. Allure still seems to be a little underwhelming (or at least heavily reliant on finding enemy weaknesses?) and Willpower I need to test more, it feels like it shines vs groups but sucks vs bosses so far. Might be an acceptable weakness given that it's also a pseudo defensive stat.

-Thank you for the speedy updates and adding the new stuff, I realize I may come off as bitchy/needy at times but I REALLY enjoy this game and have been having a blast with it. Too early to tell for sure but it gives me a lot of the same vibes CoC did, thankfully without the buzzing butthole rocks, and I'm really liking seeing where things are going and trying to add in a bit of content myself.

 

[Threshold]

CHANGE OF PLANS, BACK TO THE OLD FOREST FUCKFEST

Also did you have a chance to check out the scenes I had added? I uh, had never tried writing porn before lol so I don't know if it dragged on way too long or was a decent start or what

Not yet. I figured I would wait till after you had time with some of the new stuff.
But I I suppose early feedback is always good.

Well, shit. There goes my next build plan of willpower dominating everything. I suppose I'll go for it, but it won't be quite as spectacular as I had planned.

The damage didn't get hit too hard. It still does quite well, and arousara hits all enemies.

Soooo time for my annual mini review where I ruin everything!

-I like the new system of allowing you to continually level up until you run out to XP (tested it with 50000 xp from an elf - took a while to get thru lmao). So far I haven't been able to break it yet via skills/money/XP/etc, good work!

-Not sure if bug or feature, but if you have multiple same-named NPCs in different folders (ex. a Trisha in Event Cards and a Trisha in Town), event calls for them can get a little funky. The Mysterious Inn event for example defaults to the added town NPC Trisha. Is there a way to clarify which the game should be looking for? As with some of my questions I can just use different names (ex. WaifuTrisha, SuccuTrisha, etc) for clarity but I figured I'd ask.

-Color seems weird, using the example in mod guide of {pink}text{colorEnd} returns an error and I can't seem to finagle it into working. Not a big deal, I don't usually use colors, just noticed when experimenting.

<3333 affection check, SO useful already!

-Stat balance seems solid overall from what I can tell from testing, Power and Tech builds have similar damage output now, and Power cucks restrains while Tech gets first-turn advantage (FTA) and dodges more. FTA is HUGE but so is not getting perma restrained so from what I've tried so far, overall seems roughly even. Allure still seems to be a little underwhelming (or at least heavily reliant on finding enemy weaknesses?) and Willpower I need to test more, it feels like it shines vs groups but sucks vs bosses so far. Might be an acceptable weakness given that it's also a pseudo defensive stat.

-Thank you for the speedy updates and adding the new stuff, I realize I may come off as bitchy/needy at times but I REALLY enjoy this game and have been having a blast with it. Too early to tell for sure but it gives me a lot of the same vibes CoC did, thankfully without the buzzing butthole rocks, and I'm really liking seeing where things are going and trying to add in a bit of content myself.

When fixing the leveling issue I realized if you somehow got too much exp you would have to wait till the next time you won combat to get your level. So I fixed that too.

Currently the game pulls based on name, I've been thinking of adding an ID under the name where you can get more specific while leaving the name the same.
Which would function the same as you stated basically.

I'll have to look into the color thing. I only ever set up pink but then I didn't ever actually use it. Hopefully it didn't break when I wasn't looking.

Allure has higher scaling with moves that scale with allure and scales better with the core moves. But there also isn't a lot of allure skills for the player currently.
Willpower also has the most status effect inflicting moves and status buffs. But still might need some tuning. Also not sure if the innate defense buff is actually too weak or strong currently.
Most willpower moves also do magic damage so depending on the enemies resistance to magic it can go really well or really badly. Willpower doesn't scale with core moves though.
So, really the balance thing is something I'm going to keep an eye on as things continue cause i'm sure it needs more tuning.

If there's a modding feature people want to have I would like to know, because either I probably plan to add it in eventually, or it could be something that I didn't realize was needed.
I would like to remind you however the player does have an ass resistance. Course only one enemy actually can target it currently and that's the blue slimes.

 

[Williamtheshatner]

My current thing I'm doing is compiling a list of each and every typo, missed punctuation, or confusing sentence I can find. Some of it is preference, and I'm certainly no professional editor, but I figured getting a larger and more complete list for you to take care of in your own time might be nice. I'll be working on it on and off for a little while, so it might be done today, it might be done in the next few days. Who knows?

 

[Threshold]

My current thing I'm doing is compiling a list of each and every typo, missed punctuation, or confusing sentence I can find. Some of it is preference, and I'm certainly no professional editor, but I figured getting a larger and more complete list for you to take care of in your own time might be nice. I'll be working on it on and off for a little while, so it might be done today, it might be done in the next few days. Who knows?

I won't complain, I am most definitely not the most consistent writer, or very grammar correct some times, or coherent. My mind works in ways that even I can't comprehend sometimes.
And my own spell check passes can really only catch so much. Whatever you find will probably make it into v11.

CHANGE OF PLANS, BACK TO THE OLD FOREST FUCKFEST

Also did you have a chance to check out the scenes I had added? I uh, had never tried writing porn before lol so I don't know if it dragged on way too long or was a decent start or what

Have now, and sweet jebus those are long scenes. Not necessarily a bad thing.
Though I'm hoping some of the event menu options are temporary names. You know the one.

Feedback

-The smut is good I would say overall, with probably a few parts that could use some work. Unno which parts anymore.

-Good scene sex detailing in my opinion.

-You get a bit too goofy in some spots I think.

-You have a tendency to sometimes start sentences in a row with the same word, eg 'You...' 'You...' or in some cases similar words like It and It's.
While this isn't a very bad thing I do find it looks weird when displayed in game with lines starting the same in a row. Though I looked at the files and didn't test it in game.

-There's quite a bit of internal player character thought, opinions and reactions. This also isn't a bad thing.
But is something I try to avoid as I'm trying to leave the character more vague to allow the player to insert themselves better into the role and have their own reactions to events. So it's more of a stylistic choice.

-I'm sad the Symbol of Bonds Item isn't a symbol on the player or Trisha, least not that I saw?

-Puns. Make of that what you will. They are neither good nor bad but they are.

Though take it all with a grain of salt because I would not really say I'm the best writer around.

Hopefully when I eventually go back to add on to Trisha's content I don't make you sad. Course I don't know when that will be.

 

[heathbar101]

V10.1: Able to have the anal and sex stance at same time in battle with Nicci. Haven't tried it against others.

 

[SupremeGene]

V10.1: Able to go on an adventure despite having 0 sp , prompting being able to do nothing but caress the enemy and instantly "dying" after that. Should have a treshold so that you are unable to go out, or better yet, auto rest after each adventure making sure that you are going out fully healed.

 

[fazzdave]

The game is really good, loving it so far.

Actually, i found some free to use mostergirl stands and H event,

maybe it can be use for boss battle?

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[Threshold]

V10.1: Able to have the anal and sex stance at same time in battle with Nicci. Haven't tried it against others.

Chances are you can do it to everyone which is not good. Darn bugs making me need to do a v10.2.
Edit: Apparently not everyone.

V10.1: Able to go on an adventure despite having 0 sp , prompting being able to do nothing but caress the enemy and instantly "dying" after that. Should have a treshold so that you are unable to go out, or better yet, auto rest after each adventure making sure that you are going out fully healed.

Alternatively I could show the players arousal energy and spirit in town.
But fully healing in town would cut down on excess hassle.
Poor Lilian's purification option will become useless.

The game is really good, loving it so far.

Actually, i found some free to use mostergirl stands and H event,

maybe it can be use for boss battle?

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I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

I thank you for the suggestion but I will actually be looking for an artist starting next month, at least one that can do a monthly commission and potentially more down the line.

 

[Cryswar]

Poor Lilian's purification option will become useless.

Don't worry, she can suck the poison out ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

 

[Williamtheshatner]

Alright, this took a long time to make. Because when I attempted to upload all of my edits onto the forum and I was apparently over the character limit two times over, I pasted everything into a google drive link (because for whatever reason I can't attach documents to posts on ULMF anymore), and it is massive.

Here is the link.
You have been warned.

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Don't think I dislike this game because of this, I merely did this because I wanted to, and everyone makes mistakes. Of course, I'm no exception, and I'm quite worried that I somehow managed to make a million mistakes of my own. I hope not, anyway.

While I was doing this whole compilation thing, I had a few ideas about various things in the game, and a few bugs to report.

Ideas:
First off, would it be possible to rearrange the skills on the combat menu? Right now, abilities appear in the order in which you buy them, so being able to edit them would be nice.
Secondly, could an NPC or some kind of difficult quest be added to reset skill points, sensitivity points and/or level? I was thinking (and this is somewhat of a long winded suggestion) of maybe adding a single male hero, who is perhaps afraid of women and has a trinket/charm/ is cursed to be completely invisible to the opposite sex. He's trapped in one of the dungeons (potentially a future one), and once rescued he moves into town and has a service where he can reset your stats for your level x 200 eros and your sensitivity levels by level x 1000. Those values can be edited, of course, but it should be a steep investment. Plus, it gives a nice incentive for him, because he wants to pay off his debt to leave this "accursed country", but because he can't fight because of his fear, the only way he can get money is through you.
Third, can skill points be assigned outside of the level up screen? If you save them for later, you have to level up again to get another chance to use them.

Bugs:
When pinned by Kyra or lizard girls, when you escape the pin it still says you are in it. You can do actions and whatever you want, but anything that requires you to not be in a stance (like using the lewd bottle) cannot be used. If you attempt to push away, you can free yourself from the "pin", but the only thing that happens when you succeed is allow Kyra or a lizard girl from pinning you again if they choose to.
I was not able to recreate this one, but I was a low level fighting against two elves. I used anal insert on one (to see what she said, of course), the other elf was making out with me, and when I made the first elf climax the game crashed.

 

[Threshold]

Alright, this took a long time to make. Because when I attempted to upload all of my edits onto the forum and I was apparently over the character limit two times over, I pasted everything into a google drive link (because for whatever reason I can't attach documents to posts on ULMF anymore), and it is massive.

Here is the link.
You have been warned.

You must be registered to see the links

Don't think I dislike this game because of this, I merely did this because I wanted to, and everyone makes mistakes. Of course, I'm no exception, and I'm quite worried that I somehow managed to make a million mistakes of my own. I hope not, anyway.

Oh boy 19 pages, thank you for your efforts!
I will definitely go through this. May take a while.

While I was doing this whole compilation thing, I had a few ideas about various things in the game, and a few bugs to report.

Ideas:
First off, would it be possible to rearrange the skills on the combat menu? Right now, abilities appear in the order in which you buy them, so being able to edit them would be nice.
Secondly, could an NPC or some kind of difficult quest be added to reset skill points, sensitivity points and/or level? I was thinking (and this is somewhat of a long winded suggestion) of maybe adding a single male hero, who is perhaps afraid of women and has a trinket/charm/ is cursed to be completely invisible to the opposite sex. He's trapped in one of the dungeons (potentially a future one), and once rescued he moves into town and has a service where he can reset your stats for your level x 200 eros and your sensitivity levels by level x 1000. Those values can be edited, of course, but it should be a steep investment. Plus, it gives a nice incentive for him, because he wants to pay off his debt to leave this "accursed country", but because he can't fight because of his fear, the only way he can get money is through you.
Third, can skill points be assigned outside of the level up screen? If you save them for later, you have to level up again to get another chance to use them.

It would be possible, that or at least give it a more standardized order so its not based on when you buy them. It's not very high on my priority list but it is on there.

The option to reset stat points, sensitivity points or your level wouldn't be a bad one. I don't know what will be first though, the option to do it at town, or getting level drained. No idea when either of those will get done.

I could add that, sooner than the other things you brought up at least. Kinda knew this would get brought up eventually.
I will probably restrict the option to spend them to when you can access your inventory.

Bugs:
When pinned by Kyra or lizard girls, when you escape the pin it still says you are in it. You can do actions and whatever you want, but anything that requires you to not be in a stance (like using the lewd bottle) cannot be used. If you attempt to push away, you can free yourself from the "pin", but the only thing that happens when you succeed is allow Kyra or a lizard girl from pinning you again if they choose to.
I was not able to recreate this one, but I was a low level fighting against two elves. I used anal insert on one (to see what she said, of course), the other elf was making out with me, and when I made the first elf climax the game crashed.

The pin thing is less of a bug and more of an archaic skill that I should update now that the infrastructure is there to have it not be a stance+restrain and just restrain. As it is currently pretty jank.
Will do that for v11 and not the v10.2 i'm working on.

That is odd. I don't recall making it so the elves cum so hard the game crashes. I'm guessing you don't have the error info for that?
If not it's fine, but if you have it happen again can you grab the info for me? It sounds like a very weird and specific error.

 

[Williamtheshatner]

That is odd. I don't recall making it so the elves cum so hard the game crashes. I'm guessing you don't have the error info for that?
If not it's fine, but if you have it happen again can you grab the info for me? It sounds like a very weird and specific error.

Will do. For now, I think I'm going to try to avoid reading things for a while. My brain is slightly fried, as you might be able to understand.

I also forgot to mention, I have three little "general comments" at the very bottom of my document that might be worth looking into for writing future things. They may not be the most earth-shattering advice ever (mainly the second one, that's a personal bias I have), but they are still useful things to look into.

 

[Threshold]

Will do. For now, I think I'm going to try to avoid reading things for a while. My brain is slightly fried, as you might be able to understand.

I also forgot to mention, I have three little "general comments" at the very bottom of my document that might be worth looking into for writing future things. They may not be the most earth-shattering advice ever (mainly the second one, that's a personal bias I have), but they are still useful things to look into.

I think you earned a break.

Man I miss a lot of commas.

 

[Williamtheshatner]

Man I miss a lot of commas.

"Man, I miss a lot of commas" would probably be better. It helps to try to say it out loud, and note if any pauses happen while you say the sentence. Or at least that's how it works for me. Once again, not an actual editor by any means, I just read a lot of books as a kid.

Plus I'm kind of a huge fucking nerd but don't tell anyone that I told you that.

 

[sum1confused]

"Now I dont't mean to be rude but could you please stick your dick in the bag?" I love this game XD

 

[Cryswar]

Hmm. Two modding feature thoughts.

-Images tend to show up really weird ingame and in my experience typically only a small portion shows up onscreen and the rest is lost to eternity - some kind of resize feature to make them fit the screen would be nice.

-Maybe a giveSkill function, similar to giveItem, for skills that you want to distribute via quests/events rather than gold? As I continue to go full retard with Trisha stuff there are some ideas I want to try there, as well as other skills from some of the other events I'm working on.

 

[Threshold]

Edit v10.2 is now out.

"Now I dont't mean to be rude but could you please stick your dick in the bag?" I love this game XD

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Hmm. Two modding feature thoughts.

-Images tend to show up really weird ingame and in my experience typically only a small portion shows up onscreen and the rest is lost to eternity - some kind of resize feature to make them fit the screen would be nice.

-Maybe a giveSkill function, similar to giveItem, for skills that you want to distribute via quests/events rather than gold? As I continue to go full retard with Trisha stuff there are some ideas I want to try there, as well as other skills from some of the other events I'm working on.

Images are a pretty under developed feature currently, so best way to fix it currently is to edit the actual image. I should hopefully be expanding on it a bit in February at some point.

Give skill has been on my to do list for a while but I haven't needed it yet. So I suppose it can get done sooner.

 

[Williamtheshatner]

Edit v10.2 is now out.

Trying to slip this under the radar to avoid double posting, eh? I see right through you. Thanks for the frequent updates!

 

[krisslanza]

Tsk, tsk trying to avoid letting us know of an update!? True horror right there. -takes notes-