If it's free, then there's no real obligation for the translator to even finish, complete and/or share the translation though. At least that's what I think, especially since free translation means that the translator has sacrificed his/her time, energy and perhaps other things too to give people something to enjoy without any kind of payment or anything like that. Although things like productive critics or opinions is of course okay to be conveyed.
Personally, I understand that you might be stressed out since you've been waiting for the full translation of this game for so long and it turns out you have to wait a bit more. However, I believe what you wrote came out as a bit too rude. How can you say that LonerPrime has not tried his best? What you did was a very clear case of random accusation that's very commonly made by people who are stressed or angry. Proofreading and editing can take a really long time depending on the content.
Although again, I understand your anxiety but hopefully, you can wait a bit more and let them do what they think is best for the game. And I fully agree with you that NorzZ has done a very great job too lately. I'll be bumping my support a bit also for 1 or a few months. So, to NorzZ, thanks a lot again for all the translation and keep up the good work