Anon42
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Re: Crisis Point: Extinction - Metroidvania H-game - FINAL PUBLIC UPDATE! (July 25th)
Hey there! Thanks for all of the suggestions. Luckily, the images in the early pages of this topic are very outdated - Alicia already went through a slight change long ago, and her proportions are a bit better now. It's still not perfect, but it should hopefully be less distracting.
As far as the face goes, I can't say I agree entirely. Kyrieru's suggestion was a massive style change, not just a suggestion for a fix, so it wouldn't really be my work if I used the sprite he showed. I did recently do a slight shading change on her face - I might post a comparison shot of that soon - that makes her look a bit more feminine, though. I also edited the running animation as Triangulate suggested long ago, although who knows, I might end up touching up that animation someday anyway. Some of Alicia's movement animations are a bit stiff and I wouldn't mind improving them later on, when I get to polishing everything. Either way, thanks again for the suggestions!
Sorry for the insane lack of updates lately, everybody. Ever since I moved to my new house I haven't really been able to get any work done at all, whether it was because of bug infestations or more personal reasons, and I've barely spent any time at the computer. I only just got my office set up, and something about all of the change in life has just had me really down in the dumps. I'm only just now starting to crawl out of my funk, so I'm hoping to have some new updates to show everyone - but in the meantime, know that Crisis Point is absolutely still coming out, and I haven't forgotten about the people who aren't donating! You'll get some updates soon! They won't be playable, but I won't keep you hanging forever. Thanks so much for your patience.
It's already too late at this point but I want to give some suggestion regarding the character design, maybe you can use it in future title in case you agree with the suggestion.
- Legs are too short, minimum proportion for "leg vs the rest of the body" is 1:1 if you want realistic proportion. Legs can be longer than that for exaggerated look but not shorter.
- Her face in sprite mode looks like a dude i think (Kyrieru already gives you an good suggestion about how to fix this in the 1st page). I believe you should be able to fix this because you draw her really good in artwork version (the one in your patreon page where she points her gun).
Edit: Triangulate also gives a good suggestion about her running animation in the 1st page. He has a good point
Good luck with the game!
Hey there! Thanks for all of the suggestions. Luckily, the images in the early pages of this topic are very outdated - Alicia already went through a slight change long ago, and her proportions are a bit better now. It's still not perfect, but it should hopefully be less distracting.
As far as the face goes, I can't say I agree entirely. Kyrieru's suggestion was a massive style change, not just a suggestion for a fix, so it wouldn't really be my work if I used the sprite he showed. I did recently do a slight shading change on her face - I might post a comparison shot of that soon - that makes her look a bit more feminine, though. I also edited the running animation as Triangulate suggested long ago, although who knows, I might end up touching up that animation someday anyway. Some of Alicia's movement animations are a bit stiff and I wouldn't mind improving them later on, when I get to polishing everything. Either way, thanks again for the suggestions!
Sorry for the insane lack of updates lately, everybody. Ever since I moved to my new house I haven't really been able to get any work done at all, whether it was because of bug infestations or more personal reasons, and I've barely spent any time at the computer. I only just got my office set up, and something about all of the change in life has just had me really down in the dumps. I'm only just now starting to crawl out of my funk, so I'm hoping to have some new updates to show everyone - but in the meantime, know that Crisis Point is absolutely still coming out, and I haven't forgotten about the people who aren't donating! You'll get some updates soon! They won't be playable, but I won't keep you hanging forever. Thanks so much for your patience.