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Re: AWMBI - Discussion
It would've helped if the promise actually meant more than sex to Iris at the time.
Tell Jesse the truth, tell her what's wrong with Iris, why she's acting the way she is. And for goodness's sake, try to make it more than a one-liner. I think that's the biggest problem you're having, is Iris's statements and words are too simple.
It would've helped if the promise actually meant more than sex to Iris at the time.
Tell Jesse the truth, tell her what's wrong with Iris, why she's acting the way she is. And for goodness's sake, try to make it more than a one-liner. I think that's the biggest problem you're having, is Iris's statements and words are too simple.