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I look forward to updates
I look forward to updates
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The witch looks a lot better in fanart... :3
(First one especially, click eet)
>:3
The witch looks a lot better in fanart... :3
(First one especially, click eet)
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Damnit... the pictures are filtered for me.
Damnit... the pictures are filtered for me.
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Thank you Cole... and Lurker, I would love to see those pictures.
Thank you Cole... and Lurker, I would love to see those pictures.
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I would just like to say:
I miss this
I would just like to say:
I miss this
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Psh, preaching to the choir that's in the same shoes... or something like that.
I'm not pressuring you to get back into it, I just wanted to give a tip of the hat, let you know it was and still is appreciated.
Psh, preaching to the choir that's in the same shoes... or something like that.
I'm not pressuring you to get back into it, I just wanted to give a tip of the hat, let you know it was and still is appreciated.
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Wow, 4th page? DANG I'M SLIPPIN' CAPTAIN!
Anyway. I had a very ODD critter idea I figured I'd share to the rest of the crazy people:
-Bondage Golem-
Constructs, for the most part, are gathered together from various elements of the natural universe of whatever you may be from. From the most basic elementals created when consiousness meets elemental parts to constructs carefully crafted to be given a sence of sentience, the construct not only are resistant to magic, but also usually great as gaurds to various mages, rouge troopers with magical skills, or other forms thereof. However, there are some unconvential golem designs that have appeared here and there.
Among them is the Bondage Golem, often used by Dark Elven mistresses to patrol slave pens. Bondage Golems, like other golems, are constructed of various parts to make up a humanoid form. However, Bondage Golems are crafted out of various forms of restraint devices, all hodgepodged together as they shift around with the sounds of clinking chains, shifting material, and the occasional squeak of some form of latexish material.
A Bondage Golem spends it's days following designated patrol routes, warily using it's magical sences to keep track of any nearby anomalies like walls and stairs so it doesn't trip or crash. Upon setting apon something not marked by it's Mistress, it'll usually fling various bindings from itself at it's target, aiming to restrain it's victims so it's mistress can have them intact. It should be noted that often the parts creating a bondage-golem are pre-treated with magic energies that makes it so only the enchanter or a few trusted individuals can release the captured- if they are ever released again.
Wow, 4th page? DANG I'M SLIPPIN' CAPTAIN!
Anyway. I had a very ODD critter idea I figured I'd share to the rest of the crazy people:
-Bondage Golem-
Constructs, for the most part, are gathered together from various elements of the natural universe of whatever you may be from. From the most basic elementals created when consiousness meets elemental parts to constructs carefully crafted to be given a sence of sentience, the construct not only are resistant to magic, but also usually great as gaurds to various mages, rouge troopers with magical skills, or other forms thereof. However, there are some unconvential golem designs that have appeared here and there.
Among them is the Bondage Golem, often used by Dark Elven mistresses to patrol slave pens. Bondage Golems, like other golems, are constructed of various parts to make up a humanoid form. However, Bondage Golems are crafted out of various forms of restraint devices, all hodgepodged together as they shift around with the sounds of clinking chains, shifting material, and the occasional squeak of some form of latexish material.
A Bondage Golem spends it's days following designated patrol routes, warily using it's magical sences to keep track of any nearby anomalies like walls and stairs so it doesn't trip or crash. Upon setting apon something not marked by it's Mistress, it'll usually fling various bindings from itself at it's target, aiming to restrain it's victims so it's mistress can have them intact. It should be noted that often the parts creating a bondage-golem are pre-treated with magic energies that makes it so only the enchanter or a few trusted individuals can release the captured- if they are ever released again.
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Just a bump in regards to Erocryptozoology- if anyone has a critter, species, or anything else they wish to include in this for ideas, feel free to fling em my way, and I'll see what I can do.
Just a bump in regards to Erocryptozoology- if anyone has a critter, species, or anything else they wish to include in this for ideas, feel free to fling em my way, and I'll see what I can do.
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So... are you plotting out a short story for the Lust Rose...?
My ideas:
Something civilized or domesticated. Think a holstauros or cowgirl. Or maybe a catgirl of some type. My personal preference is for holstauros, as their benefit is obvious (milk!). But pet catgirls might be interesting to describe.
Something passive, like a slime blob. Lurks in damp, low, swampy places. Releases pheromones which encourage a victim to rest/clean up in it. Passively absorbs nutrients from said victim's sweat (and other excretions). Does not actively assail a victim unless they "taste" right (nubile female? slime's ready to divide?), at which point you get thoroughly gooped up. Baby ends up in your lower intestine/womb, and comes flowing out when it's absorbed enough from you and your diet.
Something which causes withdrawal symptoms. Slime blob's a possibility for this, but I think it'd be more interesting if tied to something more malevolently intelligent. Say, some kind of succubus, who touches a potential victim on the skin, leaving behind a contact drug. Victim gets progressively more horny and frustrated, until they seek out the succubus and get a "fix". Possibly a repeating process...
So... are you plotting out a short story for the Lust Rose...?
Hmmm... it really depends on what kind of monsters you want to write about. Humanoids, like pokégirls and the MGE? Nonhumanoid, but still biologically plausible, like squid and insects? Imaginary nightmares like spirits or tentacled horrors?
My ideas:
Something civilized or domesticated. Think a holstauros or cowgirl. Or maybe a catgirl of some type. My personal preference is for holstauros, as their benefit is obvious (milk!). But pet catgirls might be interesting to describe.
Something passive, like a slime blob. Lurks in damp, low, swampy places. Releases pheromones which encourage a victim to rest/clean up in it. Passively absorbs nutrients from said victim's sweat (and other excretions). Does not actively assail a victim unless they "taste" right (nubile female? slime's ready to divide?), at which point you get thoroughly gooped up. Baby ends up in your lower intestine/womb, and comes flowing out when it's absorbed enough from you and your diet.
Something which causes withdrawal symptoms. Slime blob's a possibility for this, but I think it'd be more interesting if tied to something more malevolently intelligent. Say, some kind of succubus, who touches a potential victim on the skin, leaving behind a contact drug. Victim gets progressively more horny and frustrated, until they seek out the succubus and get a "fix". Possibly a repeating process...
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As for monsters, anything and everything works for ideas. Urban Legends, mythic beasts, furries, real live animals twisted in some way, parasites, ya name it. I just ran into some trouble developing ideas,
Also, interesting imput, I'll see what comes up in my ideamongoring.
Yes, Lust Rose is next of the about 6 planned offhand (though the Wyvernkin technically isn't done yet...), as it's currently one of my most favorite creations. Also on the docket is another PoA beast I'm refining to a space-age role (the Matriach player mutation), two avatar apearences I've used on Second Life, though once again refined for actual use specieswise, and for kicks the demons of Slaanesh are getting the runs.'
As for monsters, anything and everything works for ideas. Urban Legends, mythic beasts, furries, real live animals twisted in some way, parasites, ya name it. I just ran into some trouble developing ideas,
Also, interesting imput, I'll see what comes up in my ideamongoring.
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Don't let my opinions stop you from writing the rest of the smut, though. The way I'd plot it, chapter 1 would be what you've written - Karen getting caught. Chapter 2 would then be the impregnation. Chapter 3, she wakes up in the wyvernkin's lair with a bulging belly, and gets to experience being nursed by the wyvernkin up to and through the birth. Chapter 4... searchers find her naked body and she wakes up in the hospital, and that's the end.
It's not? Huh. It just seemed like a good place for it to end. Certainly, if I was reading a chapter book, I'd expect that line about "riding it out - literally" to be the last line in a chapter. Not really a cliff-hanger, since we know what's coming up next thanks to the database entry, but a good natural breakpoint between Karen getting caught and Karen getting impregnated.
Don't let my opinions stop you from writing the rest of the smut, though. The way I'd plot it, chapter 1 would be what you've written - Karen getting caught. Chapter 2 would then be the impregnation. Chapter 3, she wakes up in the wyvernkin's lair with a bulging belly, and gets to experience being nursed by the wyvernkin up to and through the birth. Chapter 4... searchers find her naked body and she wakes up in the hospital, and that's the end.