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NaoSoul said:
Try describing the scene and using just a little bit of dialogue. If you need reference, try the RPG maker game Harem, by ker. It can be found either in this forum or in quite a few others. If you can't find it, pm me and I'll hand you a link to the threads.

Also, you could try some good text games, like Corruption of Champions by Fenoxo. Sure, this game is nothing like the game you have here, but what you want to see isn't the content of the game, but how the sex scenes are described. Anyway, that is just my opinion. Keep up the good work.
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I'll be sure to give them a try. Thanks!



thswherizat said:
It was a cool start! I too love that breaking of the fourth wall type game. It makes the player feel more involved.

1: I really like that you made it not necessary to grind the random encounters to be strong enough for bosses.

2: However, I found the difference in money/exp that bosses and random's give means that you would have to grind for a LONG time to see any sort of difference.

3: Map size for the sake of map size isn't a good thing. The town is FAR larger than it needs to be, with lots and lots of empty space. Same thing with most of the shops, it's a huge room with almost nothing inside.

4: The most frustrating point for me was again with the map size, when I was climbing the tree and the floors just felt like they were intended to make it longer. I would go for smaller floors with maybe a slightly tricker path to follow (possibly even an event where he can fall out of the tree?) And not just huge expanses of green to cross.

5: I'm also not super interested in the "oh yeah gimme more" type dialogue during H scenes. I'd go for a longer description of what's happening physically, and maybe some characters like the sex more (Like Gwen?) but they shouldn't all be like that.

Those were just nitpicky, I really enjoyed the not having to grind, the art, and the dialogue! Keep it up!
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1 & 2. I'm trying to make the game a more enjoyable walkthrough. I want there to be no need to grind for anything. I'll always make sure you're powerful enough for at least the story missions.
Starting with the next town, there will also be side missions for extra Munnee, and the Munnee drops from monsters increase exponentially.

3. I was trying to stress that it's a dead/empty town. Subsequent towns will be more populated with random people.

4. It's the first dungeon, so I wanted to make it simple and quick. Later dungeons will be much different.

5. I've seen a lot of this. Don't worry, I've been working on it, and there wont be as much of this later on.

I'm glad you like it!



qinlongfei said:
First of all, let me clarify I like what this game has to offer so far. Since I can't draw or program I really appreciate anyone who develop games for none profit purpose.

With that said, I prefer Japanese anime style over Western but that's just my personal preference. I thought maybe you could add some kind of journel somewhere down the line to explain who those characters are (Since you plan to have a lot of characters from different anime, comic or games, probably not everyone know who they are to begain with). Since your game already has some 4th wall breaking (the chat between the MC and Narrator, by the way I found some of their line funny) I don't think those I out of place.

And I agree with thswherizat. The map, especially the town map are way too large for what is needed. When there's practicly nothing to do and you just need to hold B and direction button for a minute to get out of town, it makes the game needlessly annoying. Also, I felt some of the description doesn't fit the current environment in the game. For example when MC enters Annie Hughes' house, I really don't felt she's much richer then the other resident in the village. She has a piano and decoration, but her house is also mostly empty and with the same stone wall and wooden floor. Not a huge problem, it just felt weird.

But don't let my opinion discourage you, and keep up the good work.
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Well, since all these characters are owned by different companies. I'm having to do parodies of them. By including a description of each one, that's directly linking them to the IP's their from, and that could get me in trouble. That's also the reason I'm only using single names.

I understand, but like I said, it's meant to be big and empty. The fact that she's "rich" because she has a piano and fancy artwork is supposed a be a joke.


Raio10 said:
I have just played this and i really enjoyed and liked the interactions between characters and the choices you can make now i cannot wait for the next update for this keep up the good work.
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Glad you enjoyed it!



Thank you everyone for your feedback! It helps me know what to improve/work on, and keeps me motivated to keep working!
 
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I think I got less of an "empty town" or "ghost town" feel from it and more of a "amateur development" feel. I know that sounds rude, but I'm not trying to be a jerk, I bet you could get that feel across with a smaller map, maybe with abandoned houses/ cracked streets, and some people talking about how quiet the place is now?
 
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thswherizat said:
I think I got less of an "empty town" or "ghost town" feel from it and more of a "amateur development" feel. I know that sounds rude, but I'm not trying to be a jerk, I bet you could get that feel across with a smaller map, maybe with abandoned houses/ cracked streets, and some people talking about how quiet the place is now?
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It's cool, it's my first game, and I'm only using the RPG Maker assets afterall. It's bound to feel that way sometimes.
 
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i like the art and the game is fun hope to see more updates
 
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Excuse me, great game i'm having tons of fun with it, so when you accept to do the blowjob with saeko, she stay in your image forever.... i did all to take the image off, but it's not giving any mercy, so i was just telling you that bug.
 
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licuki said:
Excuse me, great game i'm having tons of fun with it, so when you accept to do the blowjob with saeko, she stay in your image forever.... i did all to take the image off, but it's not giving any mercy, so i was just telling you that bug.
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Aaaaaand Done, finally finished the Episode 1, well it was great, i was pretty sure that Queen Ashe was the Skin of Ashe from LoL, but i made a misstake T_T

ty for this great game i'll wait anxiously the ep 2.
 
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licuki said:
Aaaaaand Done, finally finished the Episode 1, well it was great, i was pretty sure that Queen Ashe was the Skin of Ashe from LoL, but i made a misstake T_T

ty for this great game i'll wait anxiously the ep 2.
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Glad you liked it, and I've fixed the bug you were talking about.
 
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I was going to report the same bug with the blue fairy.

Just finished it, another job well done!

Can't wait to see where this project goes.

The filthier the dialogue the better!
 
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I have a quesiton the Ep 2, will be released with the Ver 0.07?
 
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licuki said:
Excuse me, great game i'm having tons of fun with it, so when you accept to do the blowjob with saeko, she stay in your image forever.... i did all to take the image off, but it's not giving any mercy, so i was just telling you that bug.
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I'm Having the same problem with The blue fairy
 
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yep still bug for blue fairy
 
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To the people who's having the trouble that i had but with Blue Fairy, he already said that he solved it, the next version it will dissapear.
 
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malickai said:
I was going to report the same bug with the blue fairy.

Just finished it, another job well done!

Can't wait to see where this project goes.

The filthier the dialogue the better!
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Fixed the blue fairy bug.


licuki said:
I have a quesiton the Ep 2, will be released with the Ver 0.07?
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Version 1.0 will be the same game here, just with all of the H-scenes included.
The version will be updated as I add in scenes.

Episode II will be it's own game. You'll be able to transfer your save file to keep everything you've earned with all the new content, or be able to play from the beginning.

Please keep in mind, that it will probably be another two or three weeks before I complete Episode I, and another 2-3 months before I'll be able to complete Episode II.
 
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Are you planning on selling this or keep it free release?

Because if free, okay cool.
But if you're selling... your map design needs major work. Your second town has the same feel as the first town: unnecessary large and empty.

Just keep the houses more compact to each other. I think the RPGVX has a default town template that you can look at.
 
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Arara said:
Are you planning on selling this or keep it free release?

Because if free, okay cool.
But if you're selling... your map design needs major work. Your second town has the same feel as the first town: unnecessary large and empty.

Just keep the houses more compact to each other. I think the RPGVX has a default town template that you can look at.
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Nope, it's original but if he's trying to sell it i think that you have reason, but if it's as free as i think we all want, it's original it have tons of work all together making a wtf funny op hentai history, that'll work even if you he/she sell it.

Bah that's what i think, why all games must be the same? Nah, the most original the better, well that's my opinion.
 
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Is there supposed to be a picture for each scene with a character as some just say you banged them like Yukiko & Rise and show no scene with them if its not is this going to be fixed in the next episode.
 
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The art is very good to be honest, I've seen bad art and this is masterpiece compared to that. I sure hope you aren't gonna quit it, it would be a shame! It's got potential, definitely.
 
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Is there another download link?

I've tried 6 times so far, but rapidgator keeps crashing midway on me :(
Thanks!
 
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