Yes, as he said in his comment the issue he has is: the girl goes from innocent little flower to cumslut 3000 in a matter of minutes and the issue was that there was almost no barriers she had to break to become a cumslut to which I tried to respond by saying something along these lines: How can you expect a "slow pacing"/"slow turning from innocent to cumslut" from a character that's a "cumslut" from the get-go?
The issue he has, in my opinion, is directly related to the character itself. You can't expect a slow corrupting NTR from a game that has a main character that's already corrupted/cumslut. I don't see how that would be possible. This could only happen if she was somehow pretending to be innocent but here clearly that's not the case.
This is my opinion and you might have some other opinion as he has. All I was trying is to give arguments as to why I think his statement might not necessarily be true. Some of you might disagree that she was corrupted from the get-go. From what I've understood reading and playing the game, she already was corrupted by Thomas from the start, but she never crossed the line of having sex with other men because of Haruo and because Thomas never asked that of her, but Thomas did tell her to walk naked on the beach, take clothes off around other men, massage her boobs, take all kinds of pictures of her, etc... From the conversations she had with Thomas and later with George, it was pretty clear (at least to me) that she wanted something more (that she was not satisfied). After Thomas died and later George took photos of her naked on the beach to make Marcus lose his bargaining chip, something awoke inside of her and she decided to accept her true feelings and cross the line she never did before. She decided to accept her true self and that's why she agreed to have sex with Marcus in the first place. After this, the h-scenes just steamroll one after another and she has sex with most of the NPCs in the game.
I do think that the game as a whole is fast-paced and you play through it very fast, especially if you know what you're doing. But, as I understood from his comments, this was not his main issue. He specifically said his issue was the pacing of corruption/lack thereof.
And don't take this comment the wrong way. I'm not trying to start a heated debate or attack him in any way. I'm just way too over-analyzing a porn game that I waited 5 years to be released.
