LustFire
Mystic Girl
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Re: Yoshiiki's meh drawings.
I.. didn't completely understand the context of the image you provided, but I went ahead and did my own.
So, from what I learned, you need to try to connect your limbs by demonstrating the muscles/tendon and bone anatomy somehow. The biggest problem was the left bicep, and its foreground position is not helping with the image quality. Also, I personally think the bicep is too thick and the arm too short in general. I have a feeling you're misguided to think the bicep is "thicker" than the forearm, but this exaggeration usually works for males only.
Another issue I recommend looking into is "hidden" objects (e.g. the right arm). I'm assuming it was simply an incomplete work, but it's a good habit to know the "background" of the foreground, especially with the entire character body.
Outlining is also hard work. It's especially confusing with the back spine since it depends on the camera angle, but keep that in mind.
I.. didn't completely understand the context of the image you provided, but I went ahead and did my own.

So, from what I learned, you need to try to connect your limbs by demonstrating the muscles/tendon and bone anatomy somehow. The biggest problem was the left bicep, and its foreground position is not helping with the image quality. Also, I personally think the bicep is too thick and the arm too short in general. I have a feeling you're misguided to think the bicep is "thicker" than the forearm, but this exaggeration usually works for males only.
Another issue I recommend looking into is "hidden" objects (e.g. the right arm). I'm assuming it was simply an incomplete work, but it's a good habit to know the "background" of the foreground, especially with the entire character body.
Outlining is also hard work. It's especially confusing with the back spine since it depends on the camera angle, but keep that in mind.