What I kind of found stupid was how he was like "oh no, he is a CIA, we are in trouble" and the next day just used the CIA stuff against her and completely said the opposing thing to what he said the day before. You really think, why doesn't she get her husband involved? Why does she agree so instantly?
Apart from that I really liked the writing and the setting of the game. The little boy was believable, and Mel was apart from that thing very realistic even though I wonder why he used a hidden compartment for a camera when all the waitresses do is putting on an apron and a bowtie and after work unequipping them...