Re: Dragon Throne chapter 1&2&3
I will now give my opinion I would like to know how much agree and who don't.
First for all we have to remember that this is a game done by one person without a great budget, so some things could be better, but there isn't the possibility, and what someone can think that are a couple days of work more in reality could be much more fatigue.
The real weak point of chapter 3 are the first 2 chapters, they could be better and miss a bit of things, it is also evident that Natali changed some ideas and only with chapter 3 the story is completely clear in her head, but each of us haveseen tv series that became great after some episodes, so after 2 or chapters of this level none will remember the weaker starting.
The combat is well done, not too easy not too much grinding, but I will wait the next chapters to see if all is balanced well.
The story is well written, so the dialogues, and this even if the english could be better, it's incredible that I have liked more than other game where the grammar is more correct.
The dialogue are long, but not boring, on the contrary make the scene more realistic and pleasant, putting important information, the scene with Valeria and the Father when they speak so much on thor, but I could give much examples, nearly in all the game.
If I want to find at any cost a weak point in chapter 3 is that the level is so high that what it's not at that level seem weaker.
The sex scenes are well constructed, Natali has chosen the right arguments, time and situation but miss that quid more that it's in the other scenes.
In Josephine's scene is a beautiful idea to remember that they were already lover and known each other, but it would have better some verbal crossfire and some reference more.
The scene of Alak and Addine justify what the Dalaster do at the end, but if you showed more of that sexual behaviour of Alak with her we wouldn't have justified her at the end but felt the rage mount on her in the sex scene.
Marek has 2 sex scenes (because they don't feel a big split in 2), in the first if Addine would have begin an handjob, ending with more teasing the first part would have seemed more complete and the second part she could have provoked more him, asking if he has had better and remember also at the end of all that this would be the last time of them together if he don't resolve the situation, even if this would break her hearth.
Those scenes are anyway already good and if Natali would say that with her time she had to dedicate less time on some parts I think she did the right thing to dedicate more time on the story part.
If chapter 4 will be at this level, even without an improvement, I will be very happy.
