For ur first screenshot , thats what the game title screen is supposed to be like.
if you open ur game folder ((RJ215006) Nightmare Girls English TL v0.99\Graphics\Titles1) as a example of mine. U can see the title image and its supposed to be like that.
In your second screenshot the Map is also "untranslated" for me because its a bunch of of image files that need to be edited with english text not translated.
But if u pick one of them you can still see where you can go in that specific area.
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This is a report for barraged though:
The check option which supposely means "go back" or "cancel" is untranslated thought when u pick any place.
Unfortunally editing images is something that takes a long time to do so not really something that barraged can do atm.
So your issues are not really bugs or mistakes he did translating but rather things that are supposed to look like that and images that cant be edited.
And the game probably looks fuzzed because ur trying to play it at a higher resolution that its supports by pressing "S" to change ur window size.