the soldiers of his own Throng of 100 soldiers
There are things here that I’m sure you be most interested in hearing
Redundancy and a double-use in too short a time period, just knock out 'the soldiers of'. Alternately it could be made “the soldiers of his own hundred-strong Throng”.
“God damn door… thing,” Copper muttered through strained teeth as the gate moved on its rusted hinges.
Wow, well received much? Anyway...
@Copper: I do try to capture characters... glad I got some of your vocals anyway.
@Wonderboy: Publishing, I dunno. We'll see I suppose. Another chapter. It'll come. Hopefully before Christmas.