Re: Aylia's Story - English H-Game Goodness!
YummyTiger posted Post, Sleep, Proper Update
Who's up for a quickie? Yes? Alright. Quick news is I have scoured the Internets for sounds, found some awesome ones, found some mediocre ones, found a lot of ones that didn't work. Rinse and repeat with music. Either way, I'm starting my major edit of the final chapter Tuesday (Have to go to the soon-to-be ended job tomorrow).
The major edit is fixing and adding any dialogue. One of the big things is to cut back my wordiness. I learned a long time ago that a good edit usually cuts out about 15-20%. Given how wordy I was in the prologue, that should make you shudder to think what it was originally! Editing can be a bitch, because sometimes you hit sentences/passages that don't read right, but damned if I can't come up with ways to fix them. Hard to explain if you have not tried writing, but I just don't want people thinking this is a two day process (really, what is with me?).
I also put in emotion bubbles, will be updating the dialogue to use the new facesets, add any other little nifty things the message script has that fit. I add to bland areas, I add easter eggs, I may do a quick variation to artwork... basically, it is a hardcore playthrough to get things to the final point. I've been working on artwork and finalizing quest lines, making events more structured and efficient, and all kinds of other random things, that this will be the first real playthrough from the start that I've done in almost 3 months. That kind of break is both a Godsend, and a curse. I see things fresh and see a lot more flaws, but I also see a lot more flaws.
Anyways, that's about all I got right now. I owe you guys a proper update on things though, beyond just this little blurb. I'll update the progress chart and post a more detailed update either tomorrow or Tuesday.
Thanks for your support!
YT