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Lurker Wars 2 Discussion Thread
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Double Post I know. Still...
Anyway, quick update, I am currently editing chapter 2 (I hadn't touched it for awhile because of life's little quirks), and hopefully it'll be sent back in soon enough.
Also had an idea to include pictures with each update, curious to see what people think of that.
Double Post I know. Still...
Anyway, quick update, I am currently editing chapter 2 (I hadn't touched it for awhile because of life's little quirks), and hopefully it'll be sent back in soon enough.
Also had an idea to include pictures with each update, curious to see what people think of that.
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Mind you they will not be my own cause I suck... someday I might put something of my own in though.
Mind you they will not be my own cause I suck... someday I might put something of my own in though.
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indeed.
Anyways, updated chapter 1 with a picture. So it has started.
indeed.
Anyways, updated chapter 1 with a picture. So it has started.
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If anyone is willing to do some art for the story that would be wonderful. Strictly volunteer, so no commissions but no crazy deadlines to meet. Just reply here or PM me if you are interested in doing some illustrations.
If anyone is willing to do some art for the story that would be wonderful. Strictly volunteer, so no commissions but no crazy deadlines to meet. Just reply here or PM me if you are interested in doing some illustrations.
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Ooh! Ooh! Pick me, pick me! I need an excuse to improve my drawing skills!
Ooh! Ooh! Pick me, pick me! I need an excuse to improve my drawing skills!
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It doesn't matter how much you practice; you'll never be able to capture Oni's godliness in a picture
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I CAN STILL TRY DAMN IT.
I CAN STILL TRY DAMN IT.
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Sure Dark, I mean you are the original proprietor of Lurker Wars, and you'll know perfectly what fits into the universe.
I'm not selecting people though, anyone who wants to can put up some artwork.
Sure Dark, I mean you are the original proprietor of Lurker Wars, and you'll know perfectly what fits into the universe.
I'm not selecting people though, anyone who wants to can put up some artwork.
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I think I know what those aircraft are - the one that Siphon hopped into; I think it's a Harrier, or at least a derivation of one?
And I think you captured my character quite well - I do indeed believe 'Mother Fucker' would be my choice of words at that moment XD
I think I know what those aircraft are - the one that Siphon hopped into; I think it's a Harrier, or at least a derivation of one?
And I think you captured my character quite well - I do indeed believe 'Mother Fucker' would be my choice of words at that moment XD
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Thank you Shrike, and if you must know, the picture for chapter 2 is from Resistance 2 for the PS3.
Kusanagi, glad you liked the way I represented your character, also the fighters that Siphon was using was mostly made up, I just took the hovering idea from the Harriers.
Thank you Shrike, and if you must know, the picture for chapter 2 is from Resistance 2 for the PS3.
Kusanagi, glad you liked the way I represented your character, also the fighters that Siphon was using was mostly made up, I just took the hovering idea from the Harriers.
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Huh, well in that case, I probably haven't seen them before, unless they showed up in the first two missions of the original, or on some trailer somewhere. They still fit quite well though
Huh, well in that case, I probably haven't seen them before, unless they showed up in the first two missions of the original, or on some trailer somewhere. They still fit quite well though
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Spectacular writing as expected, Sinful!
There's only one part I can fault:
Also, you might want a comma after shirts.
Spectacular writing as expected, Sinful!
There's only one part I can fault:
The problem's in the plurals. (Sweat beaded at Hopeyouguess's forehead... rolled onto several of his faces and then into the collars of multiple shirts.) Just remove the 's' at the end of 'faces', 'collars' and 'shirts'. ...Unless, of course, Hope is some form of hive mind, in which case it's simply an example of good storytelling.
Also, you might want a comma after shirts.
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Ah shit... I'll have to go fix that. Thank you Host
Ah shit... I'll have to go fix that. Thank you Host
